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Posted by Raven on Thursday, March 24, 2011 at 6:53pm.

I need help on fixing my paper. Could you grade me on a scale of 1 to 12.

The World of Technology
Technology, Technology, thatís all we use today. Thereís Facebook, Twitter, Myspace, and so many more. My opinion on technology is that I agree because many kids are failing and falling behind in school and grades.
There are so many reasons I agree with the writer of the Scope magazine article ďIs Technology Messing with Your Brain?Ē One reason is kids are spending more time with their gadgets than with their friends. Another reason is kids are spending more time with their electronics than with their homework. Last reason is kids canít concentrate or remember anything because their brain is multitasking with all of this technology.
To emphasize my point, you should agree that kids having technology is taking their minds off real stuff that matters. School work should come first and then you could play later. Many parents think Iím probably right and the other parents think Iím wrong. We need to get these intelligent kids cracking into these books, just if they were on social networking sites.

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