Posted by Debbe on Monday, March 21, 2011 at 11:26am.
Your sentences are correct, yes.
I've seen this assignment before, though, and you need to double-check to see if there's a minimum number of personal pronouns to be used or if you are supposed to use a minimum number if different personal pronouns. In your sentences, you've used one first-person pronoun and four forms of one third-person pronoun.
If there are no minimums, then you're fine.
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