February 22, 2017

Homework Help: Writing

Posted by Ramona on Tuesday, March 15, 2011 at 9:38pm.

Can you grade me out of 12 points? Did I have any voice? Proofread my writing.

A Valuable Item
A valuable item is something that’s given to you by a special someone that you will have forever to the end. Many people have valuable items that they love, that don’t cost much money. One of my favorite valuable items is what my sister made me which is a handmade keychain.
There are so many reasons the handmade keychain is valuable to me. One reason is my sister thought about me and that is what made me feel special. Another reason it’s valuable to me it is really divine the way she made it. My sister shaped the keychain into a butterfly. I know it must have taken some time! Next reason is it reminds me of a rainbow, because it has the colors in a rainbow which makes it colorfully and attractive. Last reason it is beautiful and I enjoy putting it on my purses.
As you can see, a valuable item to me is a handmade keychain. That is one thing I will value and treasure forever made by my little sister by hand. I have many valuable items, but this handmade keychain meant a lot to me. I will always remember it! Do you have a valuable item that didn’t cost much money?

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