Homework Help: English

Posted by Angela on Thursday, March 10, 2011 at 12:47am.

Please check for any errors. Correc them for me and I would appreciate it.

Thank you for your interest in Rogers Video Theater.
I am enclosing a copy of the leased agreement. The $1695.00 unit can be leased for $98.00 a month for 24 months. The first and last to payments are required in advanced. As I told you, I do not personal recommend this method. If you were to purchase this $1695.00 set and pay $297.00 down the balance would be financed for 36 months. The interest would be one percent per month on the remaining principles.
The self-contained unit shown in the enclosed brochure is our principle unit, and it is extremely popular in lounges and restaurants. The walnut finished is being offered at a special price of $1695.00 and other finishes are available at $1795.00.
The ceiling mounted united is also applicable to your operation. It requires no floor space and it delivers the same great picture. If you wish to install the unit yourself you will find that our instructions are easy to follow. Otherwise, you would need to get someone in your area to install the unit.
If you have other questions concerning any of our units, please contact me. We look forward to serving you in the near future.

English - Lindsey, Thursday, March 10, 2011 at 1:08am
Thank you for your interest in Rogers Video Theater.
I am enclosing a copy of the leased agreement. The $1695.00 unit can be leased for $98.00 a month for 24 months. The first and last two payments are required in advanced. As I told you, I do not personally recommend this method. If you were to purchase this $1695.00 set and pay $297.00 down, the balance would be financed for 36 months. The interest would be one percent per month on the remaining principles.
The self-contained unit shown in the enclosed brochure is our principle unit, and it is extremely popular in lounges and restaurants. The walnut finish is being offered at a special price of $1695.00 and other finishes are available at $1795.00.
The ceiling mounted unite is also applicable to your operation. It requires no floor space and it delivers the same great picture. If you wish to install the unit yourself, you will find that our instructions are easy to follow. Otherwise, you would need to get someone in your area to install the unit.
If you have other questions concerning any of our units, please contact me. We look forward to serving you in the near future.
English - SraJMcGin, Thursday, March 10, 2011 at 1:11am
leased = lease agreement
first and last to payments = first and last payments (drop "to")
in advanced = in advance

personal = personally recommend

Be sure to study the difference between principal and principle:
http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/principal-versus-principle.aspx

the walnut finished = the walnut finish

ceiling mounted united = ceiling-mounted unit

Sra

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