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Homework Help: English

Posted by Mike on Thursday, February 24, 2011 at 1:59pm.

Can you please check these sentences for me, please? Thank you very much.

1)The avenger is involved in complex planning.
2) A lot of murders occur within the play.
3) The hero becomes more and more isolated throughout the play (better: within the play, as the play develops?)
4) The action is delayed by a period of doubt, which wll involve complex planning.
5) The Jews were restricted in the professions they could follow (is "do" possible?)
6) Hamlet plans to avenge (not revenge) the murder of his father. Eventually he gets (has? is possible) his revenge.
7) You didn't stick to the point since you reported the whole plot instead of explaining how he plans to kill Claudius.
8) Do you mind if I leave? Yes, I mind (is it possible?)

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