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Posted by angela on Thursday, February 24, 2011 at 2:12am.

Correct any errors found.Thank you!

Thank you for your request for a credit card with our store.
Before we can issue you a credit card, we must ask you to furnish the information on the enclosed credit application. When we receive it we will process your application as quickly as possible. Mail your application to the Attention of Mrs. Ann Collins, your credit representative. If you ever have a question concerning your account contact Mrs. Collins. She will be happy to help you personally.
For the next seven days, we will have a sell on personalize stationery. So that you may be able to take advantage of the sale, we have enclosed a brochure illustrating the designs available and containing an order form. If you wish to order some of this beautiful personalize stationery, we will process your order along with your credit application. You will be billed through your new account. This stationery sell ends Friday, July 7.
Thank you for you interest in our company. We look forward to serving you for many years to come.

English - Writeacher, Thursday, February 24, 2011 at 5:21am
Thank you for your request for a credit card with our store. Before we can issue you a credit card, we must ask you to furnish the information on the enclosed credit application. When we receive it, we will process your application as quickly as possible. Mail your application to the attention of Mrs. Ann Collins, your credit representative. If you ever have a question concerning your account, contact Mrs. Collins. She will be happy to help you personally.

For the next seven days, we will have a sale on personalized stationery. So that you may be able to take advantage of the sale, we have enclosed a brochure illustrating the designs available and containing an order form. If you wish to order some of this beautiful personalized stationery, we will process your order along with your credit application. You will be billed through your new account. This stationery sale ends Friday, July 7.

Thank you for you interest in our company. We look forward to serving you for many years to come.

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