I still have a few more doubts on some sentences. I hope you still have time to check them.

1) Victorian values consisted in (better: implied) the possession of a comforable house, chariable activity (not actions?) and attending the church regularly.
2) As to (the) content (??) English Romanticism focused above all on the individual as the subject of all meaningful experience.
3) Great emphasis was laid (not given?) on the experience of childhood.
4) Mr Gradgrid bases his life on facts disregarding (neglecting, but not "not paying attention to) emotions and imagination.
5) Sissy isn't influenced by school's education (or: by the school educational method?)
6)He is described as an unattractive man, always carrying a rule and a pair of scales.
7) Dickens uses some similes for the description of Coketown (or to describe Coketwon?), like the smoke which looks like snakes in the sky.
8) Before the Education Act churches had been in control of the educational facilities in England.

1) Victorian values included possession of a comfortable house, charitable giving, and attending church regularly.

2) English Romanticism focused above all on the individual as the subject of all meaningful experience.

3) Great emphasis was laid on the experience of childhood.

4) Mr Gradgrid bases his life on facts, as well as disregard of emotions and imagination.

5) Sissy isn't influenced by the school's curriculum. (What does this mean? That she is intent on remaining uneducated and illiterate?)

6) OK

7) Dickens uses some similes to describe Coketown, such as the smoke that looks like snakes in the sky.

8) Before the Education Act, churches had been in control of the educational facilities in England.

1) The correct phrase should be "Victorian values consisted of the possession of a comfortable house, charitable activities, and attending the church regularly." To determine the correct wording, you can break down the sentence and analyze each part. In this case, the sentence is stating the things that comprised Victorian values. Start with "Victorian values consisted" and then ask yourself "consisted of what?" The answer would be "the possession of a comfortable house, charitable activities, and attending the church regularly."

2) The correct phrase should be "As for the content, English Romanticism focused above all on the individual as the subject of all meaningful experience." To determine the correct wording, you can break down the sentence and analyze each part. In this case, the sentence is discussing the focus of English Romanticism. Begin with "English Romanticism focused" and then ask yourself "focused on what?" The answer would be "the individual as the subject of all meaningful experience."

3) The correct phrase should be "Great emphasis was placed on the experience of childhood." To determine the correct wording, you can break down the sentence and analyze each part. In this case, the sentence is stating that there was a significant importance given to the experience of childhood. Begin with "Great emphasis was laid" and then ask yourself "what was emphasized?" The answer would be "the experience of childhood."

4) The correct phrase should be "Mr. Gradgrind bases his life on facts, neglecting emotions and imagination." To determine the correct wording, you can break down the sentence and analyze each part. In this case, the sentence is describing how Mr. Gradgrind prioritizes facts over emotions and imagination. Start with "Mr. Gradgrind bases his life on facts" and then ask yourself "what does he neglect?" The answer would be "emotions and imagination."

5) The correct phrase should be "Sissy isn't influenced by the school's education." To determine the correct wording, you can break down the sentence and analyze each part. In this case, the sentence is discussing how Sissy is not affected by the education provided by the school. Start with "Sissy isn't influenced" and then ask yourself "influenced by what?" The answer would be "the school's education."

6) The sentence is already correctly written. It describes an unattractive man who always carries a rule and a pair of scales.

7) The correct phrase should be "Dickens uses some similes to describe Coketown, like the smoke which looks like snakes in the sky." To determine the correct wording, you can break down the sentence and analyze each part. In this case, the sentence is mentioning the similes that Dickens uses to describe Coketown. Start with "Dickens uses some similes for the description of Coketown" and then ask yourself "what is one example of those similes?" The answer would be "the smoke which looks like snakes in the sky."

8) The correct phrase should be "Before the Education Act, churches had been in control of educational facilities in England." To determine the correct wording, you can break down the sentence and analyze each part. In this case, the sentence is discussing the control of educational facilities in England before the Education Act. Start with "Before the Education Act" and then ask yourself "what was in control of educational facilities?" The answer would be "churches."