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Homework Help: English

Posted by Mike on Sunday, February 20, 2011 at 4:26am.

Thank you very much for your help.
Here are some more sentences I'm doubtful about.

1) Being a Renaissance man, Hamlet doubts the existence of an afterlife.
2) He doubts suicide/ He has doubts about committing suicide/ He is doubtful about suicide. He is not sure of what will happen after death. Every man (better: Everyone one/each of us) is scared of what will happen after death.
3) The hero usually has (goes through is also OK?) a period of doubt in which (during which) he projects (correction: plans) his revenge.
4) Hamlet is a revenge tragedy because it includes (not respects) all the features of the revenge tragedy present in Seneca.
5) Hamlet decides to have vengeance for (?) his fatherís murder.He seeks revenge for his fatherís murder. He wants to take revenge on Claudius for/revenge himself for /avenge his fatherís murder.
6) Hamlet wants his revenge murdering the killer of his father. Better: Hamlet wants to take his revenge by killing Claudius, his fatherís murderer.

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