Posted by **Monica** on Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:19pm.

our goal is to pick a candy. My candy i picked was Mars Bar. The teacher told us to make 3 claims of our chocolate and then beside those 3 claims we have to write 3 evidences. The 3 evidences are the things im having trouble on. I have my 3 claims already but i don't have any evidence. our evidence has to relate to our 3 claims. the teacher told us to go on the computer and find evidence:

example of evidence: its the 2nd best chocolate bar(i don't think that's true)

My 3 claims are:

1. its chocolate

2. has a little bit of caramel in it

3. tastes sooo good, mouthwatering, crunchy!

PLEASE HELP ME FIND THE EVIDENCE!!! THANKS!!!

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**hw**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:21pm
for the first one perhaps say what chocolate is made from....even include from what country the cacao beans come from

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**Monica**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:24pm
that doesnt make sense to me?

i need evidence that relates to the claim and the mars bar. how do figuring wut chocolate is made from help?

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**Ms. Sue**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:26pm
The evidence that it's chocolate can be the listing of ingredients on the wrapper plus the origin of the chocolate, if known.

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**hw**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:28pm
say that it is made from delicious cocoa powder, sugar and milk

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**Monica**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:30pm
can u tell me the rating of this chocolate bar? if it was rated 1st, 2nd etc...

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**Monica**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:36pm
wut do i do for the caramel and the tastes soo good mouthwatering crunchy part?

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**Ms. Sue**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:37pm
I no nothing about rating candy bars. Who does the ratings? Why? What about differences in taste?

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**Ms. Sue**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:38pm
*know

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**Monica**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:40pm
but wut about the caramel part, what do i write about that?

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**Monica**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:44pm
i changed my 3rd claim: its now: there are lots of ways to eat it..

and my evidence is you can eat it as a snack or many people eat it as a treat on birthdays

im still having trouble for the caramel

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**Arushi**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:50pm
for the caramel all i wrote was that the chocolate and caramel make a great combo

is that ok?

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**Monica**, Tuesday, February 8, 2011 at 8:51pm
i think its great!

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