Can you please proof this letter for all errors? I need to make sure it is free of errors.
Dear Mr. Wilshire:
Pursuing to our discussion last week we expected to receive your completed application together with the minimum enrollment fee. If you are wavering and hesitating to enroll for this valuable program, you probably think that either you do not need it or you cannot afford it.
If you think you do not need it, consider what accepting this additional protection could mean to your family. How long will benefits from your present insurance last then? Is your present coverage enough to help them avoid financial hardship?
If you think you can’t afford it, please reconsider your p. Do you realize that the premium is less than the cost of one good steak dinner? Isn’t helping to protect your family financial security a better way to spend your money?
Please reconsider. Remember your family is depending on you.
Yours truly,
Harold Marshall
Pursuing = Pursuant
lst week, we
last then? = last? OR Then how long, etc.
p. = position?
family financial = family's financial
Sra
that was supposed to be priority. thanks
hey? what happend to my answers?
Alicia -- your answers were deleted because they were irrelevant and wrong.
Please do not continue posting answers.
But I did check them with word? sorry. :-(
Thanks ms. SUE
So no more posting answers for me? :-( I only messed up once. :-(
-Alicia Cunn