Posted by Anonymous on Friday, January 28, 2011 at 11:06am.
Or could I mention anything about knowing beforehand?
The second sentence is much better.
The first is awkward and wordy.
Thanks, does the second sentence need any fixing at all?
Nope. It's great just the way you wrote it.
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