I forgot to include the following sentences. Can you check them please? Thank you
1) The medieval perspective of death, which saw death as a liberation from the prison of the body is countered by the Renaissance one, which was doubtful about (?) the existence of an after-life.
2) This is the rub, the obstacle which makes us hesitate and bear our earthly sorrows rather than fly to others we don't know of (about?).
3) He considers the delays of justice, the pains of unreturned love, the insults and punishments which those who are good take from the unworthy (underserving).
4)He medidates upon the fact that it will take only a bare bodkin to release us from our suffering(s).
5) The fear of something after death, expressed in the image of the unknown country from which no traveller comes back paralyses the will and prevents self-destruction.
6) Conscience makes us cowards and prevents us from committing suicide. The conscious thought turns the hue of resolution pale.
7) Cowardice is the ability to stay alive and bear the pain of human condition.Action is seen as a current of water , a river, whose direction is turned awry by our conscience.
1) The medieval perspective of death, which saw death as a liberation from the prison of the body is countered by the Renaissance one, which was doubtful about (?) the existence of an after-life. Wordy. Try this:
From the Medieval perspective, death was a liberation from the prison of the body. It was countered by the Renaissance perspective, which doubted the existence of an afterlife.
2) OK
3) He considers the delays of justice, the pains of unreturned love, the insults and punishments which those who are good take from the unworthy (underserving). This is very difficult to follow. Identify the main subject and the main verb and revise so that those two elements are as close to each other as possible.
4) meditates
5) OK
6) Conscience makes us cowards and prevents us from committing suicide. The conscious thought turns the hue of resolution pale. This reads strangely. What does the second sentence mean?
7) Cowardice is the ability to stay alive and bear the pain of human condition. Action is seen as a current of water, a river, whose direction is turned awry by our conscience. Watch spacing.