Homework Help: english

Posted by Anonymous on Sunday, January 23, 2011 at 3:38pm.

7. Which of these sentences is correct or illustrates the best style? (Points : 1)
The report was thorough. Furthermore, it saved the department several hundred dollars.
The report was thorough. It saved the department several hundred dollars.
The report was thorough. The report saved the department several hundred dollars.

english - SraJMcGin, Sunday, January 23, 2011 at 3:47pm
Personally, (and they are all grammatically correct) I prefer the first one. It could even have been done in one complex sentence! Why do it in two, ask I, when it can be one in one!

Sra

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