Posted by mika on Friday, January 21, 2011 at 2:28am.
I don't see these elements in your answer:
"Compare the event to one or more similar events. When comparing, use at least three comparatives and three superlatives."
In addition, your writing is filled with run-ons. Fix them.
ok i understand but are the pronouns and adjectives and adverbs right??
Also pronouns: yours, everything
"mines" - check spelling
"extra" is an adjective
"wne" = ? (If you mean "when," it's not an adverb here; it's a conjunction.)
"again" = adv
There may be others.
Individual Assignment: Practice with Pronouns, Adjectives, Adverbs, and Comparisons
• Write several sentences describing a recent interaction with a friend or family member about personal finance or credit cards. This interaction may be imagined or real.
• Use at least five different pronouns, adverbs, and adjectives in your sentences.
• Identify all pronouns used by italicizing them.
• Bold each adverb.
• Underline each adjective.
My dad added me as an extra card holder on his credit cards. I was very excited that I could purchase products now and pay for them later. I didn’t realize how much money I was spending. He came over to my house recently, instantly I realized that he was frowning, and I knew by the envelope he held that it was bothering him. "Is everything on here yours," He asked pointing at our credit card statement in reference to how much money I had spent. I was embarrassed I couldn’t look up and look him in the eyes. He asked again I looked up, his eyes meet mine, and I couldn't think of anything to say. The debt was all mines, and I have to find a way to be responsible and pay everything off so he will trust me again. I used the money that I saved by not paying up front and paid the bill. Now I only use the credit card when needed. I pay cash if I have it and I consider if I really need it before I use credit.
i dont understand how to compare
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