I did three more corrections myself. Can you see if they are OK?

1)Also the doctor lives and works in a small laboratory and the monster learns the human civilization closed in a small cottage. Correction: The doctor lives and works in a desolate laboratory,too. The monster is confined to a small cottage when he learns the ways of humans.
2) His eyes, described as dull, yellow and watery, his black lips and his sallow skin that enables to see the pulse of his muscles, veins and artieries, and his shrivelled complexion contrast with the monster's pearly white teeth and with his silky black hair. (Correction: his dull, yellow, and watery eyes, his black lips,sallow skin that enables to see the pulsing work of his muscles and his and shrivelled complexion contrast with .....)
3) For the monster's creation Dr. Frankenstein choose (corr: chose) beautiful parts of creature (body parts selected from beautiful corpses) but the finished man is horrible.
He has black lips, inhuman eyes and a (?) shrivelled complexion. These characteristics are in contrast (better: contrast) with his pearly white teeth.

2) that enables ONE to see

3) parts of THE creature

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