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Homework Help: English

Posted by Franco on Friday, January 7, 2011 at 4:18pm.

Could you please revise these sentences, too? Thank you.

1)Advertising has also a fundamental role on (?) the way we dress. If I were (was?) invited to a New Yearís party, I would wear a long grey long-sleeved shirt over a pair of black leggings and a belt over (??) it.
2)I donít follow a particular clothing style. I like wearing in a strange way.
Is it wrong to say "In how many films did he act?"
3) I love old-fashioned clothes and I often wear clothes from the seventies (how can I turn it into an adjective?).
4) Today I have a Led Zeppelinís black jumper on. Under it Iím wearing a t-shirt with Jerusalem on it. Iíve also a pair of jeans and black shoes on.
5) I love rings and I have one on (?) my right ring finger. Iím also wearing a blue cotton scarf, that is my mumís present. (better: which is a present from my mum)
6) Once the way we dressed wasnít very complicated. Television and magazines teach (?) us how to dress ourselves .
7) Iím wearing a blue long-sleeved dress over a pair of black leggings and a pair of black boots. Iím a sport person (better: Iím a sporty person, Iím a sports fan).
8) I like wearing colorful patterned t-shirts. Iím wearing a polo-neck black (or: a black polo-neck?) t-shirt. I have a pair of two-color lace Ėup trainers. Finally, Iím wearing wrist bands (some wrist bands) and a necklace.

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