Posted by yolanda on Sunday, January 2, 2011 at 5:09pm.
Youlanda. You are not writing what the questions asked.
The first question is how will you know if the student is successful...? Where in the first paragraph did you answer that?
The second question asked what good things can you write about ..?
You didn't ever mentioned that, at all. Are you reading what the instructor asked, or just writing what you feel?
Reading, and listening, to what is asked is one of the most fundamental skills of communication. Pay attention to the questions.
First of all, you are still writing about negatives instead of what the questions are asking you to focus on.
Second, here's a link to your first post, in which you have NOT ADDRESSED what the assignment is asking you to address:
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1293855397
You have not written up what your plan of action is.
You have not stated what "a Positive Change" in order to become "a successful student in college."
You have not stated and explained what "success in life, career, school" would be.
Do you need help understanding what these questions are asking of you??
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