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I forgot to include these sentences. I really hope you can have a look at them, too.

1)Frankenstein is composed of parts of dead bodies (of parts selected from corpses)
2)You forgot to introduce the element of fear when presenting the gothic fatures of "Frankenstein".
3) We don't know how the doctor infuses (or infused) life into a lifeless being.
4) Fear is another important element but it just appears when the monster starts killing. (better: fear is another important element which appears only when he starts killing).
5)Despite the limbs of corpses that Dr Frankenstein had selected were beautiful (correction: though the limbs of corpses he had selected were beautiful/despite the fact that the limbs...?), his creation is disgusting.
6)The doctor wants to exceed human limits.
7)Another element of the gothic novel are the desolate environment were the novel is set. It begins and ends in the Artic Ice where the ship is trapped.
8) Other desolate places are the laboratory full of corpses and the cottage where the monster lives.
9) The last characteristic is the fear (or: is that of fear) , which begins to be present only when the monster kills a child.

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    1)Frankenstein is composed of parts of dead bodies (of parts selected from corpses) Either one works; you choose

    2)You forgot to introduce the element of fear when presenting the gothic fatures of "Frankenstein". Check spelling - features; the title Frankenstein belongs in italics, not quotation marks.

    3) We don't know how the doctor infuses (or infused) life into a lifeless being. I'd use past tense.

    4) Fear is another important element but it just appears when the monster starts killing. (better: fear is another important element which appears only when he starts killing). Yes, I think the second one is better.

    5) Though the limbs of corpses he had selected were beautiful, his creation is disgusting. reworded

    6)The doctor wants to exceed human limits. OK

    7)Another element of the gothic novel is the desolate environment in which the novel is set. It begins and ends in the Arctic Ice where the ship is trapped. Read carefully for the corrections I made, including "Arctic."

    8) Other desolate places are the laboratory full of corpses and the cottage where the monster lives. OK

    9) The last characteristic is the fear that becomes obvious only when the monster kills a child. Read carefully for changes.

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