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Homework Help: English

Posted by Franco on Tuesday, December 28, 2010 at 12:40pm.

Can you please check these sentences for me, please? Number 4 contains a run-on sentence I need to simplify. Thank you very much.


1) Victor created the monster with body parts selected from corpses chosen for their beauty. (??)
2) Victor created the monster by selected parts of corpses chosen for their beauty.
3) Other characteristics of the gothic novel present in "Frankenstein" are the presence of mystery and that of fear.
4)The most important characteristic of the monster is the contrast between some beautiful parts of his body, like his pearly white teeth and shiny black hair and some traits typical of a beast, like is dull eyes and yellow skin, which shows the veins and arteries pulsing under itself.
5) This description enforces the sensation of fear and illness (?) which the creature produces in who (??) is watching him.

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