Homework Help: COM/155

Posted by BRANDY on Wednesday, December 15, 2010 at 1:06am.

Review pp. 517–520. Describe your experience with credit and credit cards in a brief paragraph using at least five adverbs and five adjectives in your description. Bold the adverbs and underline the adjectives

Just wanted to know if this is correct or do I need to revise....

My first(adjective) experience with a credit card was a disaster,leading me quickly(adverb) in debt. I completely(adverb), maxed it out and had an extremely (adverb), hard time keeping up with the monthly(adjective), payments. During this time my credit score suffered drastically(adverb), . Not only that, the extremely(adverb), high (adjective)interest rate added to my stress of trying to get a handle on the debt building up. My impulsive(adjective) decision to get a credit card at an early(adjective),age continues to affect my credit and ability to receive loans.

COM/155 - Writeacher, Wednesday, December 15, 2010 at 7:23am
My first(adjective) experience with a credit card was a disaster, leading<~~space after comma; change "leading" to "leaving" me quickly(adverb) in debt. I completely(adverb),<~~delete comma maxed it out and had an extremely (adverb),<~~delete comma hard time keeping up with the monthly(adjective),<~~delete comma payments. During this time my credit score suffered drastically(adverb),<~~delete comma . Not only that, the extremely(adverb),<~~delete comma high (adjective)interest rate added to my stress of trying to get a handle on the debt building up. My impulsive(adjective) decision to get a credit card at an early(adjective),<~~delete comma age continues to affect my credit and ability to receive loans.

In addition, "disaster" and "hard" and "this" and "credit" are adjectives. So is "my" if you want to count it!

Nice job.

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