Posted by Franco on Sunday, December 12, 2010 at 6:16pm.
3 - arose (delete the other two verbs!!)
5 - That's not entirely correct. She bore several children, but only Mary lived to adulthood, and in fact she did become queen after her father's and brother's deaths. So how would you rephrase that sentence?
6 - Clarify who "he" is. Add the word "of" after "Head."
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