Homework Help: English

Posted by Franco on Sunday, December 12, 2010 at 8:07am.

Can you please check these sentences?
Thank you.

1)What factors can have an influence (play a role?) on the way we dress?
2)Are you fashion conscious? Have you ever been to a fashion show?
3)Do you belong to any fashion conscious (?) teenage group? What sort of clothes do you like wearing?
By the way, what are you wearing today?
4)What would you wear if you were invited to a New Year's party?
5)Do you like your physical appearance (Are you satisfied with yourself?) or do you wish you were differen?

English - Writeacher, Sunday, December 12, 2010 at 8:25am
1)What factors have an influence on the way we dress?

2) OK

3)Do you belong to any fashion conscious group of teenagers? What kinds of clothes do you like to wear? By the way, what are you wearing today?

4) OK

5)Do you like your physical appearance or do you wish you were different?

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