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December 19, 2014

Homework Help: english

Posted by erica p. on Thursday, December 2, 2010 at 11:30am.

i need to know if i corrected these two paragraphs properly. i need to know if the sentences flow properly and if there's any errors thank you.

1. A lot of people donít have wills. Everyone needs a will, but not all people have one. Wills are important because they explain who gets your stuff after you die. You donít want your things going to someone you donít want them to go to. 1.My Aunt Martha went to a lawyer to get a will, I did my will online. My dad died in 1988. He didnít have a will. His stuff went to my step mom, who I donít get along with. If he would have had a will, I might have been able to start college sooner. But my dad didnít have a will. A will is good and you need to get one. Do you have a will?
2. Individuals can be denied credit for a number of reasons. Individuals who are near limits on existing cards, have too much outstanding debt or too many accounts overall, have a history of late payments, charge-offs or bankruptcy are likely to be denied credit. Individuals denied credit, by law, will receive a letter documenting the reason for the denial under the Fair Credit Reporting Act. Individuals who receive that letter should then examine the reasons for the denial and make efforts to correct their credit.
3.Avoiding and managing debt is hard. Things cost so much money that itís hard not to spend more than you make. The bills pile up, the utilities cost a lot, and going to the grocery store is expensive too. Then once those bills are paid, someone in the family gets hurt and needs to go the doctor or an unexpected bill comes in like car tags or something. We are told to just use cash and not use credit cards to help stay out of debt. Whoís going to pay those extra monthly bills if itís not the credit cards? Avoiding and managing debit is too hard.

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