posted by queen on .
help me write a paragraph, using several sentences, to describe a recent interaction with a friend or family member about personal finance or credit cards. This interaction may be imagined or real. Use at least five different pronouns in your sentences. Identify all pronoun in bold.
this is what i have done but is not enough to meet the word counts.
I recently spoke to my daughter about her use of credit cards. [ I told her I thought her balance was getting to high and that she should make more than the minimum payment each month. We had already had this discussion in the past, but she didn't listen and now has a large credit card debt. (Pronouns used are "her," "she," "already," "we, and "my.") ]
Your pronouns are correct -- EXCEPT -- "already" is an adverb, not a pronoun.
You forgot that "I" is a pronoun.
Go into more detail to expand your paragraph.