Posted by queen on Wednesday, December 1, 2010 at 8:52pm.
Your pronouns are correct -- EXCEPT -- "already" is an adverb, not a pronoun.
You forgot that "I" is a pronoun.
Go into more detail to expand your paragraph.
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