Wednesday
April 1, 2015

Homework Help: English

Posted by Franco on Friday, November 26, 2010 at 1:40pm.

Thank you very much for your corrections. I still have a few alternatives for you to check.


1) The demand for new clothes created the necessity (better: caused the development of new machinery?) to invent machinery for cloth-making.
2) New factories were built (sprang up is also possible?) as a consequence of the development of steam-power and the introduction of the steam engine. 3) The population shifted from the south to the north of England since these areas were rich in natural resources.
4)The country was deserted.
Workers asked for precise regulations concerning working conditions, hours and wages. In particular, they asked for higher wages and a reduction of the working hours.
5) New steam-powered (driven?) machinery was invented. Transport became faster thanks to the invention of steam trains.
6) Before the industrial revolution the power to drive machinery was water. Then the steam power was introduced.
7) There weren't any regulations concerning working conditions (and not of work?)

Answer this Question

First Name:
School Subject:
Answer:

Related Questions

business - Question 17 of 20 0.0/ 5.0 Points Suppose that the income elasticity ...
English - I forgot to include these other sentences. Are the alternatives ...
English - I still have a few doubts. I hope you can have a look at them, too. ...
English - I still have a few doubts about these sentences. I really hope you can...
English - I forgot to add these sentences. Thank you very much. 1) The rise in ...
English - Thank you very much! I still have a few other sentences I'm not sure ...
English - I did some of the corrections myself (in parentheses). Could you ...
English - Here are some more alternatives I'd like you to check. Thank you very ...
English - I forgot to include the following statements. Thank you very much for ...
English - I still have a few doubts on some sentences. Thank you very much. 1) ...

Members