Posted by sanjeevan on Friday, November 19, 2010 at 2:22pm.
The words between the brackets do not make full sentences. They are incomplete and don't make sense.
1. Delete all semicolons (;) - they are not used correctly.
2. Determine what each of the following sections are supposed to say, and then revise so they make sense:
If we interpret this to the belief the Hindus follow What is "this"? You need to insert "according" in front of "to." Do Hindus follow only one belief?
the cycle in which the soul of all living things trying to reach god, Brahma Are you referring to the beliefs regarding reincarnation? If so, be sure to say so. In addition, this part needs a verb; I see only participles and an infinitive.
has a similar concept. This makes no sense to me because I can't make sense of the first two parts.
Please clarify the entire passage.
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