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Posted by heather on Monday, November 15, 2010 at 6:15pm.

I'm writing my essay on the book Edward's eyes and my essay is about the three types of themes in the book. The first theme is about the closeness of a familys relationship to each other. How would I write my topic sentence for my first paragraph. I'm confused

English - Writeacher, Monday, November 15, 2010 at 6:23pm
One theme in this story is the closeness of a family.

... or something like that.
English - Writeacher, Monday, November 15, 2010 at 6:25pm
Remember not to be wordy! Too many convoluted sentences will turn your readers off right away!

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/concise.htm

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