Looks good! On your later post, which I read first, are some links that might help. The B's give it a nice alliteration. Some other B words you might use: baffle, balk, ban, bar, battle, beat, begrudge, belt, berae, bwilder, blacken , bli nd bludgeon, boot, bore, bother, bug, bully, burden
They are such a blight
Keep them out of sight
Let them fly a kite
I'm not gonna fight
They are far from right
(I could go on, but somehow at the end, you should show that you are better than they. I want YOU to win!)
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