Posted by Franco on Thursday, November 11, 2010 at 6:29pm.
1. late, because
2. apologizes, Mrs.
3. Who is doing the jazz dance, Mrs. Winter and Mickey? Unclear referent.
4. Who is a snake? Referent again.
5. Justify ...delay, otherwise you will not be admitted to...
6. ...time, but remember to put/pack it in...
Review your use of commas.
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