Posted by Franco on Thursday, November 4, 2010 at 6:38pm.
1. Commas after "phone" and "school" - these are compound sentences and need that comma in there.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
See #2.
2. Delete "got" - comma needed after "radio" These are the same types of errors I corrected earlier this afternoon. You need to get these things under control. See #1 in the comma use link above.
The rest are fine, but get rid of the question marks and double-check for commas needed for the above two reasons.
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