Can you check if he following sentences are possible, please? Thank you very much in advance.
1.In the first part the ancient Mariner stops a wedding guest to tell him his dreadful tale. The killing of the albatross is significant in two ways.
2) Firstly, Coleridge doesn’t say why the Mariner kills the albatross. This suggests the irrationality of the crime. Secondly, this action is against nature and breaks a sacred law of life.
3)In the second part the Mariner begins to suffer punishment for what he has done.
4)The ship has ceased to move and the sailors are tortured by thirst. The only moving creatures are slimy creatures in the sea at night.
5) In the third part the Mariner’s guilty soul becomes conscious of what he has done and of his isolation in the world.
6)A phantom ship comes closer to the doomed crew and is identified as a skeleton ship. Death and Life-in Death cast dice; the former wins the Mariner’s fellows and the latter wins the Mariner’s life.
7) In the fourth part this sense of solitude is stressed. Then the Mariner blesses the water snakes and re-establish a relationship with the world of nature.
6. please check "Life-in Death" or is it "Life-in-Death?"
Sra