Compare and contrast your abilities as an academic writer now as opposed to when you began at Axia College. Using four comparatives and four superlatives within your responses, explain what has led to these changes and what changes you will make in the future.

When I began attending Axia College I was not the best writer in my class. I learned to be more careful with my writing. This class has been the hardest class I have had. As I worked on my school work I became better, but not the best. I do not want to be the smartest kid in the class. I knew the more I tried to work on my writing the better I would be. I do not want to be the worst writer in my class, so I plan on putting 100% into learning the grammar rules. I need to learn to be smarter at grammar for my children. I do not want to be the smartest in the family but I want to be able to teach my children what I have learned.

Sounds good.

And I found 4 comparatives and 6 superlatives in there, so that's fine, too.

Commas are needed in a couple of places.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
See #s 2 and 3.

thank you

You're very welcome.

When I compare my abilities as an academic writer now to when I first started at Axia College, I can confidently say that I have made significant improvements.

Firstly, I have become more careful with my writing. Initially, my writing lacked attention to detail and precision. However, through practice and feedback from my professors, I have learned to pay close attention to every word and sentence structure, making my writing more accurate.

Secondly, this class has been the hardest but also the most valuable. The challenges I faced forced me to push beyond my comfort zone and exert extra effort in honing my writing skills. As a result, I have grown immensely as a writer, surpassing my previous abilities.

Additionally, I am no longer content with being just better, but not the best. I have set high standards for myself, driven by the desire to continually improve. By relentlessly working on my writing skills, I aim to become the best writer I can be, both within my class and beyond.

Moreover, I have realized the importance of mastering grammar rules. Grammar plays a crucial role in conveying ideas accurately and clearly. It is not enough to just be competent in grammar, I strive to be exceptional. By dedicating myself to understanding the intricacies of grammar, I am confident that I will become a stronger writer.

Looking towards the future, I am committed to ongoing growth and improvement. I understand that writing is a lifelong skill, and I am determined to continue enhancing my abilities. By seeking out opportunities for learning, such as workshops, online courses, and reading books on writing, I will continuously expand my knowledge and refine my writing style.

In conclusion, my journey as an academic writer has been marked by significant changes and improvements. Through a commitment to carefulness, perseverance in challenging situations, setting high standards, and prioritizing grammar skills, I have transformed myself from a writer struggling to a competent and confident one. Moving forward, my focus will be on striving to become the best writer I can be and continuously expanding my skills and knowledge in the field of writing.