Posted by Allyson on Thursday, October 28, 2010 at 5:46pm.
Could somebody help me start off this essay?
CD= Concrete detail ( Facts)
Commentary, ( Opinnion, but since this is a essay on religion, facts can go here)
I don't know how to start..
Heres what I've done so far:
oi55.tinypic( DOT) com/11azxnk.jpg
Essay help? - TutoredOne, Thursday, October 28, 2010 at 5:51pm
How did you do the tiny pic jpg thing, Allyson?
Essay help? - Allyson, Thursday, October 28, 2010 at 5:52pm
I uploaded it to tinypic, erased the beginning part, & put the (dot) part in to work, since you can't use web addresses here.
Essay help? - Ms. Sue, Thursday, October 28, 2010 at 5:54pm
I assume you're working on the attention getter of the introduction.
Judaism, Christianity, and Islam have sometimes been at war with each another.
Essay help? - Allyson, Thursday, October 28, 2010 at 5:56pm
Thanks Ms Sue, and for CD number one, I wrote down: Life wasn't always peaceful for the three monotheistic religions, they were always fighting over land and items.
Is that good?
Essay help? - Ms. Sue, Thursday, October 28, 2010 at 5:57pm
Essay help? - Allyson, Thursday, October 28, 2010 at 5:58pm
Essay help? - Ms. Sue, Thursday, October 28, 2010 at 5:59pm
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