Paragraph, find error in paragraph
posted by Anonymous on .
A lot of people have wills. Everyone needs a will, but not all people have one. Wills are important because they explain who gets your stuff after you die. You don't want your things going to someone you don't want to get it. My Aunt Martha went to a lawyer to get a will. I did my will online. My dad died in 1988. He didn't have a will. His stuff went to my step mom, who I don't get along with. If he would have had a will, I would have been to college sooner. But my dad didn't have a will. A will is good and you need to have one.
I know some errors Everyone,needs a comma, comma before because, My Aunt Martha, My dad two sentences can come together with a comma after 1988, he... paragraph has a topic sentence but the writer could have use her words better in her sentences.... Help me please.
step mom, with whom I don't get along.
I would have gone to college OR I would hav been in college
No comma after Everyone!
You could combine 2 sentences into: My dad died in 1988 without a will.
instead of "stuff" the word "property" should be used.