Homework Help: Paragraph, find error in paragraph

Posted by Anonymous on Monday, October 25, 2010 at 10:18pm.

A lot of people have wills. Everyone needs a will, but not all people have one. Wills are important because they explain who gets your stuff after you die. You don't want your things going to someone you don't want to get it. My Aunt Martha went to a lawyer to get a will. I did my will online. My dad died in 1988. He didn't have a will. His stuff went to my step mom, who I don't get along with. If he would have had a will, I would have been to college sooner. But my dad didn't have a will. A will is good and you need to have one.

Paragraph, find error in paragraph - Anonymous, Monday, October 25, 2010 at 10:30pm
I know some errors Everyone,needs a comma, comma before because, My Aunt Martha, My dad two sentences can come together with a comma after 1988, he... paragraph has a topic sentence but the writer could have use her words better in her sentences.... Help me please.
Paragraph, find error in paragraph - SraJMcGin, Tuesday, October 26, 2010 at 2:27am
step mom, with whom I don't get along.

I would have gone to college OR I would hav been in college

No comma after Everyone!

You could combine 2 sentences into: My dad died in 1988 without a will.

Sra
Paragraph, find error in paragraph - Anonymous, Friday, October 29, 2010 at 2:43am
instead of "stuff" the word "property" should be used.
Paragraph, find error in paragraph - Sagie, Saturday, February 16, 2013 at 10:59pm
Girl,boy,what,wait

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