February 22, 2017

Homework Help: English

Posted by Franco on Friday, October 15, 2010 at 5:49pm.

Can you please check if the following corrections are OK? Thank you very much for helping me.
1) I think my socks bring luck.
2) Italian teenagers like wearing large dark shades (better: sun-glasses), designer clothes and baseball caps with a peak (and not: peak baseball caps?)
3) I think most teenagers (also: the greater part/the majority of teengers) like wearing like me (as I do?)
4) They like wearing techno (?), punky or sports clothes.
5) I'm wearing a rucksack (Better: I'm carrying a rucksck on my back/on my shoulders?)
6)I'm also carrying a compass and two hiking sticks.
7)I'm wearing a T-shirt with the logo of the sponsor (not: the sponsor's logo??) on it, a plain blue wind jacket and comfortable baggy (?) denim jeans.
8)I'm wearing a yellow T-shirt under a comfortable blue anorak.
9)Some teenagers like wearing tight clothes whereas others like weaing baggy ones. Someone else is in the middle (I don't know how to correct this) and likes wearing casual clothes, like jeans and a T-shirt.

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