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August 29, 2014

Homework Help: English

Posted by Anonymous on Wednesday, October 13, 2010 at 7:32pm.

When a heart brakes, some time it makes the people a negative person, who thinks every one is a reason of his or her failure life he afraid of being decline again in his life. He tries to protect himself and make a wall around himself where no one can reach to his heart and his bitterness could not overcome to any thing.

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