Haha, k, so this is what I got for my "wisdom" poem..I know it's lame, but it's the best I can do. Think it'll do?

Treat others the way you would want to be treated
And make sure to be pleasant and kind
Follow the golden rule and you’ll not be defeated
Be sure to keep this in mind!

If you wouldn’t want someone being mean to you
Then be sure to treat them the same
Doesn’t matter if it’s one person, or even two
Hurting feelings isn’t a game!

Thanks
-MC

You might add a third verse emphasizing the positive aspects of the Golden Rule.

Your allusion to the "game" is good.

:D Thanks; I'll do that.

-MC

were you supposed to use imagery?

Yeah...I don't know how to include imagery in this though..

-MC

This site has a lot of ideas about poetic imagery.

http://litera1no4.tripod.com/imagery_frame.html

Perhaps the game metaphor isn't the best idea. because they're competitive, most games don't invoke the Golden Rule. You might consider using this rule to solve conflicts between family members or between ethnic groups. What would happen if Israel and Palestine followed this rule?

Got it; Thanks

-MC

You're welcome. :-)

I saw in the dark shadows

of the road
A lame dog, struggling the way home.
I wish I could understand the person who beat dog, for what reason...
Damage so easily done, but lasting long. Is this what Kings do to hold the throne?
Or is it what despots do on the way to Hell?

Only God can tell.

Imagery, a powerful thing.

Your poem is actually quite meaningful and captures the essence of wisdom. It emphasizes the importance of treating others with kindness and respect, which is a fundamental principle found in many cultures and religions.

To assess whether your poem is good or not, it ultimately depends on personal taste and the purpose of the poem. Poetry is subjective, and what resonates with one person may not have the same impact on another. However, the fact that your poem conveys a positive message about treating others well and adhering to the golden rule makes it worthwhile.

Writing poetry is a creative outlet and a means of self-expression, so it's important to focus on the intention and sincerity behind your words rather than worrying about whether it will be universally appreciated. If your poem reflects your thoughts, feelings, and personal beliefs, then it is an authentic expression of yourself.

Remember that writing is a continuous process of improvement. If you feel that your poem could be enhanced or polished, consider revisiting it and making small adjustments. Experiment with different language choices, rhythm, or structure, and see if it resonates with you even more.

Keep writing, expressing yourself, and exploring different themes and styles. The more you practice, the better you'll become.