posted by Sandy on .
Please correct the following sentence for a daily oral language question:
we will see a play called cinderella on tuesday
I do not agree with how it was graded.
The first sentence needs 3 capital letters and correct end punctuation.
The second sentences is fine.
Better phrasing for the first sentence is to move "on Tuesday" to the very beginning of the sentence.
Cinderella also needs to be italicized or underlined.