Homework Help: english

Posted by Anonymous on Wednesday, September 22, 2010 at 9:05pm.

How can I fix this sentence?
If Julie willingly listens to my mom’s health concerns and provides emotional support, the patient would feel very satisfied with the nurse’s care, and her pain may lessen.

English - Writeacher, Wednesday, September 22, 2010 at 9:07pm
Is the patient your mom? If so, you need to keep the reference consistent -- refer to her either as the patient or as your mom -- all the way through the sentence.

Give it a try and see what you come up with.

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