Hi, this the description paper I posted before except I changed it. I have to redo it. I took you guy's advice please check and correct me. Thanks.

By the door, there paused an impatient low spirited woman. She was in her twenties and she had big, bright brown eyes along with long dark hair. She continued to pause at the door, her heart throbbing and her throat bloating like a balloon filled up with water that is one poke away from its water to gush out. While her face is frozen with fear;she sweeps mutely and wants secretly to free herself from what is standing in front of her as she feels caged like battered beast.

Is this supposed to be an anecdote from your experience?

No. I have to describe a person that is afraid. Thank

By the door stood an impatient and despondent young woman in her twenties. She had strikingly large, radiant brown eyes and long, dark hair. She paused at the door, her heart pounding and her throat constricting like a balloon filled to the brim with water. Fear froze her face as she silently yearned to liberate herself from the oppressive presence that loomed before her, feeling trapped like a wounded creature.

Overall, your description captures the emotions and atmosphere effectively. However, I have made a few minor changes to improve the flow and clarity of the sentences. Well done on incorporating the advice given previously!