Posted by mikaliah on .
How do i make this a stronger thesis statement?
There are many circumstances that effect the actions of fictional characters.
Poverty, family conflicts, and war affect the actions of fictional characters.
You'll need to modify that sentence to reflect the characters and circumstances about whom you're writing.
I said, Family conflicts,economical status, and cultural backgrounds affect the actions of the characters in Toni Cade Bambaras The Lesson, and William Faulkners A Rose For Emily.