Homework Help: english

Posted by flame on Sunday, September 19, 2010 at 3:52am.

how can i make this sentence more concised
She also demonstrates that the patients can make an impact on the nurses and influence them to care for the patients like their own family

English - Writeacher, Sunday, September 19, 2010 at 8:58am
"make an impact" is today's slang for "influence" ... so do you see the repetition? What can you cut out and still keep the meaning the same?

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