Posted by flame on Sunday, September 19, 2010 at 3:41am.
Mostly some of the extraneous words need to be removed. Try something like this:
A woman who came in for a routine blood pressure check told Ashley that her 19-year-old daughter is pregnant.
The only problem is who "her" is referring to -- the woman or Ashley!! You'll have to decide that and see what else needs fixing.
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