Posted by terri on Wednesday, September 15, 2010 at 3:54pm.
You've still simply stated the facts of the story. No opinion here.
A true thesis statement includes factual information plus your opinion or the position you take regarding that factual information.
So ... what's your OPINION about what Minnie Wright did?
Is your opinion something all the other readers of the story would agree with? If so, ditch it and write another. You want an opinion or position that you have to support -- to convince others that you are right, no matter what they thought at first.
fact + opinion = thesis
is this a good srong thesis statemnent? Minnie acted out of rage and lost her sanity which relates to the isolationa, dender differnece and unhappines.
is this a good srong thesis statemnent? Minnie acted out of rage and lost her sanity which relates to the isolation, gender differnece and unhappy marriage.
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