Posted by terri on Wednesday, September 15, 2010 at 3:36pm.
What you've written is not a thesis statement. It's simply a very brief summary of the story.
Go through ALL of the examples here:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
Notice that the first in each pair is NOT a thesis statement; the second one IS an acceptable thesis statement.
Please try again.
okay is this a better thesis?
Minnie Wright’s insanity relates to isolation, unhappy marriage and the gender difference all causes her to the murder of her husband.
That is not a sentence. Look at this. Minnie Wright's insanity, caused by isolation, an unhappy marriage and gender differences, relate to the murdering of her husband.
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