Posted by terri on Wednesday, September 15, 2010 at 3:36pm.
I did help with my thesis statement? I writing an essay from the play trifles by susan Glaspell.
Thesis: Minnie Wright loses her mind which relates to isolation,the gender differneces and the canary death.
I need a very strong thesis
English - Writeacher, Wednesday, September 15, 2010 at 3:41pm
What you've written is not a thesis statement. It's simply a very brief summary of the story.
Go through ALL of the examples here:
Notice that the first in each pair is NOT a thesis statement; the second one IS an acceptable thesis statement.
Please try again.
english - terri, Wednesday, September 15, 2010 at 3:53pm
okay is this a better thesis?
Minnie Wright’s insanity relates to isolation, unhappy marriage and the gender difference all causes her to the murder of her husband.
english - GuruBlue, Wednesday, September 15, 2010 at 4:29pm
That is not a sentence. Look at this. Minnie Wright's insanity, caused by isolation, an unhappy marriage and gender differences, relate to the murdering of her husband.
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