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I did help with my thesis statement? I writing an essay from the play trifles by susan Glaspell.
Thesis: Minnie Wright loses her mind which relates to isolation,the gender differneces and the canary death.

I need a very strong thesis

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    What you've written is not a thesis statement. It's simply a very brief summary of the story.

    Go through ALL of the examples here:

    Notice that the first in each pair is NOT a thesis statement; the second one IS an acceptable thesis statement.

    Please try again.

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    okay is this a better thesis?
    Minnie Wright’s insanity relates to isolation, unhappy marriage and the gender difference all causes her to the murder of her husband.

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    That is not a sentence. Look at this. Minnie Wright's insanity, caused by isolation, an unhappy marriage and gender differences, relate to the murdering of her husband.

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