How can I rewrite this? Please.
He liked shooting things.
(A). and wrestling with his father. (B) hammering things, smashing things.
Joy leapt in his fathers heart for his son.
(A) thirsty for knowledge (B) Who was quick to learn.
They stood.
(A) In the gathering shadows
(B) In front of barracks
(C) While their American friend came forward.
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1)He liked shooting things, hammering things, smashing things and wrestling with his father.
2)Thirsty for knowledge, Joy leapt in his fathers heart for his son who was quick to learn.
3) In the gathering shadows, they stood in front of barracks while American friend came forward.
Thanks for the help!
To rewrite the sentence "He liked shooting things," you can consider adding more details and varying the sentence structure. Here's an example:
"He found pleasure in engaging in various activities, such as shooting targets and participating in matches."
For the sentence "Joy leapt in his father's heart for his son," you can rephrase it by incorporating different feelings and adding descriptive language:
"His father's heart danced with delight at the sight of his son, who filled him with immense joy."
To rewrite the sentence "They stood," you can provide more context and specificity to make it more engaging:
"They stood resolute, their figures silhouetted against the gathering shadows, while awaiting the arrival of their American friend near the barracks."
Remember, rewriting sentences allows you to bring in your own creativity and style while preserving the original meaning.