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The Pseudolus is a tricky slave .Even his master‘s son named Callidorus need his help. Callidorus is wealthy lovesick young man but unfortunately he depend on pseudolus‘s ideas to get his young salve girl friend , named Phoenicium . "Help me: what should I send this man / To stop my girl from going on sale?"
He is wealthy man but he has no power he gave all authority to his family servant. Callidorus ‘s character shows that he wealthy may not always be powerful and intelligence . It is amazing how pseudolus is controlling the other charachters in the play by using his cunning manner.
It is able to be appreciating that how Pseudolus complete all tasks by his intelligence. I think being a salve, no one can dare to compete powerful and wealthy authorities. But he did .He wins the bet with simo and he also gets the girl .As well as about the Ballio and Callidorus, it is good example that power and wealth have a potential to be corrupt and power can’t get succeeds all the time .It is the intelligence which can defeat the powerful man too like the pseudolus did.
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(omit The) Pseudolus is a tricky slave .Even his master‘s son, omit named Callidorus, needs his help. Callidorus is a wealthy, lovesick young man but unfortunately he depends on Pseudolus‘s ideas to get his young slave girl friend, omit named Phoenicium . "Help me: what should I send this man / To stop my girl from going on sale?"
He is awealthy man, but he has no power he gave all authority to his family servant. Callidorus ‘s character shows that although he is wealthy, he may not always be powerful and intelligent. It is amazing how Pseudolus is controlling the other charachters in the play by using his cunning manner.
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The paragraph you provided contains some grammatical errors and could be improved for clarity. Here is the revised version:
"The character of Pseudolus in the play is that of a tricky slave. Even his master's son, Callidorus, relies on his help. Callidorus is a wealthy young man who is in love, but unfortunately, he depends on Pseudolus' ideas to win over his young slave girlfriend, Phoenicium. Callidorus's story shows that wealth does not always equate to power and intelligence. It is amazing how Pseudolus manipulates the other characters in the play with his cunning manner.
It is remarkable how Pseudolus accomplishes tasks through his intelligence. As a slave, one would not expect him to challenge powerful and wealthy individuals, but he does. He wins a bet with Simo and even manages to win the girl. The examples of Ballio and Callidorus highlight the potential for power and wealth to corrupt, and how intelligence can triumph over powerful figures, as Pseudolus did."