Traveling to Paksanghan Waterfall
During the summer vacation, I went to Paksanghan Waterfall in the Philippines. I went there by zeepney and by canoe. In front of the waterfall, I took a lot of pictures. It was great fun to bathe in the water under the waterfall. I always feel happy when I look at this picture.
(Would you like to correct the story? Thank you.)
English - Writeacher, Friday, August 20, 2010 at 7:21am
I would remove the word "the" after "During" but that's all. Everything else looks and reads very well.