Human trafficking is a serious social issue around the world, because it violates human rights. The human and social issues of human trafficking can consist of: (DELETE COLON AND CAPITAL) Physical abuse of victims, psychological trauma and the economic and political implications of crime. The effect that human trafficking has on an individual and society is destructive.
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Victims of human trafficking are forced into prostitution, work in quarries, and sweat shops, farms, as child soldiers and other forms of involuntary servitude. (AWKWARD SENTENCE) Children and young women are targeted the most, because of poverty and lack of economic opportunity.(UNCLEAR PHRASING. POOR PEOPLE ARE TARGETED MOST, AND WOMEN AND CHILDREN ARE MORE VULNERABLE.) The trafficker will trick the victimS with promises of employment, educational opportunities, marriage and a better life (OJP, 2005). Many times, once the trafficker has the victim, he or she will get the victim addicted to drugs to use as a leverage to get the victim to do what the trafficker wants.
The social impact that human trafficking can have on a person can be devastating. Sixty-five percent of women who are victims of sex trafficking will have serious physical internal injuries, twenty-five percent will have head injuries and twelve percent will report broken bones. The female victim also has a higher risk of sexually transmitted disease such as HIV and permanent damage to their reproductive system. Many of these victims will ("EXPERIENCE") emotional disorders sue (SP) to the sexual and physical abuse and lack of sanitary living conditions (NCADV, 2006).
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In the future, if nobody is available to proofread your work, you can do this yourself. After writing your material, put it aside for a day — at least several hours. (This breaks mental sets you might have that keep you from noticing problems.) Then read it aloud as if you were reading someone else's work. (Reading aloud slows down your reading, so you are less likely to skip over problems.)
If your reading goes smoothly, that is fine. However, wherever you "stumble" in your reading, other persons are likely to have a problem in reading your material. Those "stumbles" indicate areas that need revising.
Another option, if it is available on your computer, is to have the computer read it to you.
Once you have made your revisions, repeat the process above. Good papers often require many drafts.
I hope this helps.