Which of these make more sense/sound better?
Please remove all information with regards to my account from your servers.
Please remove all information related to my account from your servers.
Thank you.
The 2nd. The first would be "with regard to"
Sra
I agree with Sra. The second one is MUCH better -- smoother; more concise.
Both phrases are grammatically correct and convey the same meaning. However, the second phrase "Please remove all information related to my account from your servers" may sound slightly better and more formal.
To determine which phrase makes more sense or sounds better, it is important to consider the context and tone of your communication. If you are writing a formal letter, the second phrase may be more appropriate. On the other hand, if you are communicating in a more casual or informal setting, such as through an email or chat message, either option could work depending on your personal preference. Ultimately, choose the phrase that best fits the style and tone of your overall message.